Thursday, December 12, 2019

November/December W4: Man Sentenced to 6 Months for Eating a Cookie Is Released

Leila Ettachfini

"A judge reversed Gregory Fields' six-month sentence on Monday, but his lawyer says similarly disproportionate sentences are nothing unusual."
Vice, December 9, 2019

          The criminal justice system in America has long been a topic of debate, with the civil rights era only pushing it further into the spotlight. Leila Ettachfini takes a look at a more peculiar case from earlier this year, one that involved a man of color and his unjust sentence. While most critics of the racial inequities of the justice system might look towards police brutality or other, clearer examples of a violent or oppressive nature, Ettachfini instead uses a case that involves rather trivial circumstances but a profound message. The aforementioned defendant, a man of color undergoing rehabilitation, was charged with a crime so petty that it is questionable whether or not it should have gone to the courts in the first place. However, the verdict came out to be a prison sentence of six months, which he and his lawyer declared ridiculous, disproportionate, and unjust. While the author fails to give much more context than this, she notes that the judge overturned the ruling, which would suggest that the fault more likely lies with the courts in this situation. Ettachfini primarily highlights the defendant's grievances and his struggle to resist his prosecution, adding to the empathetic strength of her argument. By looking instead to a nonviolent criminal case involving a minority, the author attempts to expose the injustices of the system by revealing a case that points to the universal oppression of certain groups in the American justice system, as the evidence presented suggests that minorities are disadvantaged even in petty cases. However, the lack of specific context and the absence of an acknowledgment of alternative stances or perspectives constitute this piece's primary flaws, as the author fails to consider any speculations regarding a similar case involving different racial groups.

Sunday, December 8, 2019

November/December W3: Dell Has Made $15 Million Working with ICE This Year

Leila Ettachfini

"Yet the company says it supports "comprehensive immigration reform.""
Vice, November 22, 2019

          With the ever-popular "humanitarian crisis" at the southern border that remains a subject of heated discussion among left-wing journalists, Ettachfini and several others have recently been uncovering the business partnerships between certain large companies and the U.S. Immigration and Customs Enforcement (ICE), the primarily-blamed culprit for the aforementioned crisis. In this case, Ettachfini attacks Dell, using their seemingly-contradictory statements as evidence for their hypocrisy in working with ICE. Using specific sources and pieces of evidence, the author outlines Dell's history with the immigration agency and utilizes a statement from the Southern Poverty Law Center (SPLC) as a kind of credible source. Thus, the audience is able to immediately recognize the major flaw in the author's attempt to establish credibility, as the SPLC is an organization with a controversial history and is still involved in major efforts to polarize social issues in America. Additionally, the author references some of her past articles and those of her peers in order to draw parallels between Dell's actions and those of other large corporations, specifically those dealing in IT and technology. Throughout the piece, the author's tone remains assertive and aggressive, as Ettachfini takes care to thoroughly detail each piece of relevant evidence, especially those that weaken the stability of Dell's defense. The author even includes an update at the end that describes the company's same-day response to the publication of her article. Through these, Ettachfini establishes her aggressive tone and methodical argumentation to her audience in an appealing attempt to gain traction as a pundit.

Saturday, November 30, 2019

November/December W2: CBP Refused to Let Me and Other Doctors Give Migrants Flu Shots for Free

Leila Ettachfini


""We thought, 'How can they deny it if it's not going to cost them anything?'" Dr. Julie Sierra told VICE."
Vice, November 22, 2019

          Leila Ettachfini takes a look at the southern border and the heated controversies that surround it by detailing a personal account of a certain group's attempts in dealing with Customs and Border Protection (CBP). In an interview with Vice, Dr. Julie Sierra from Doctors for Camp Closure gives explanations and context in her communications with CBP regarding vaccination of migrants and asylum seekers. With the article's clear exigence being the recent flu-related deaths of three migrant children while under CBP custody, the author uses the interview with Dr. Sierra and statements from the CBP regarding its policy in order to expose the flaws in the CBP's system and place upon them the blame for the children's deaths. While the interview constitutes a majority of the article's content, the author carefully introduced Doctors for Camp Closure before selecting specific portions of the interview to include, mostly being details about the group's actions and motives. Much of the piece's argument lies entirely within the words of Dr. Sierra rather than the author, but Ettachfini still includes pieces of supporting numerical evidence in order to impact the context with which the audience will interpret the interview. Regardless of the audience's prior knowledge or preconceptions about the "border crisis" (either one of them), the author writes with precision, only presenting facts relevant to her argument while leaving the rest up to the audience's purposefully-influenced interpretation of the interview. 

Tuesday, November 19, 2019

November/December W1: Freedom of Religion Doesn't Exist If People Are Afraid to Wear Symbols of Their Faith

Leila Ettachfini

"A third of Jews in the U.S. have “avoided publicly wearing, carrying, or displaying things that might help people identify” them as Jewish, according to a new poll. What kind of freedom is that?"
Vice, October 23, 2019

          With the release of a recent poll, it was found that roughly a third of the American Jewish population avoids "publicly wearing, carrying, or displaying things that might help people identify" them as Jewish. The poll, released by the American Jewish Committee (AJC), along with the recent one-year anniversary of the Pittsburgh synagogue shooting, is the clearest exigence for this piece, as it primarily serves as a response to the new findings. Ettachfini, a Muslim, also details a personal anecdote regarding the Christchurch shootings in New Zealand to support her argument that while the government is primarily no longer involved in the oppression of minority religious groups, "anti-Semitic" and "islamophobic" sentiments in the U.S. have been on the rise, especially since the election of 2016. Despite the words of politicians that condemn international oppression of religious freedoms, the author claims that they do little to stop domestic de facto oppression and violence. Putting aside the historic questionability of the AJC and the ADL, Ettachfini still provides other pieces of hard, reliable evidence, mainly from current events and FBI databases. However, while the author is primarily concerned with minority religious groups, she fails to acknowledge the rising negative sentiments towards more dominant religious groups in America. In addition, she pulls evidence from groups that have actively worked to condemn Christian churches, organizations, and political parties internationally without addressing the fact. It is reasonable, however, to suggest a simple lack of knowledge, and so the benefit of the doubt is fairly given. As such, Ettachfini provides a brief yet still complete argument that effectively combines reason and emotion.

Saturday, November 16, 2019

October/November 2019 Monthly Project: Why Progressives Should Choose Anna North


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Why You Should Choose Anna North

Have You Been Interested in Social Politics Lately?

Are You Looking For a Distinguished and Consistent Progressive Author?


Do You Appreciate Less Banter and More Substance in Your Media?

If you answered "Yes" to any of these questions, then consider yourself a part of Anna North's target audience.

Ms. North is currently a Senior Reporter at Vox, writing mainly on current events and covering issues of gender and social justice. However, you may also know her from her previous positions at the New York Times or Buzzfeed. Even if you're not an active political reader, you may still have seen her name before if you're a fan of dystopian fiction or Game of Thrones, as she's authored works of fiction such as America Pacifica and The Life and Death of Sophie Stark. Additionally, her next novel, Outlawed, a fictional narrative of a feminist midwife in the Wild West, is slated to release in 2021 and is complete with the same explicitly political undertones of her previous works.

If you're more interested in her nonfictional political writings, though, you should be able to get a feel of her style and ideological leanings from the linked articles that I've analyzed below:

 "“Nervous Nancy” tweet shows his problem with powerful women" - A criticism of President Trump's behaviors and remarks towards women in politics.

"These laws were meant to protect people from HIV. They’ve only increased stigma and abuse." - A detailed look at the history and consequences of HIV laws around the nation.

"“Failed” abortions, a period-tracking spreadsheet, and the last clinic standing: the controversy in Missouri, explained" - A summary of a recent development in the abortion debate.

"A new Trump administration rule could hurt LGBTQ youth in foster care" - A speculative and concerned criticism of the foster care system.

The modern progressive media is lost without writers like North. Her consistent emphasis on facts and hard evidence over excessively emotional argumentation presents her in a light that shines brighter than the rest to most readers in the modern context of journalism. While you'll find the same, familiar stances and views that you see in most new-age American progressives, you may find new ways to look at issues and argue either for or against them. The degree to which you may or may not agree with her arguments is irrelevant. Instead, her confident--yet still unhesitantly polarizing--styles of argument development should catch your interest, for she tends to expose the side of progressive journalists you may not always see.


Sunday, November 10, 2019

October/November 2019 W4: A new Trump administration rule could hurt LGBTQ youth in foster care

Anna North

" The proposal is part of a bigger pattern."
Vox, November 7, 2019

          The White House recently proposed a new rule regarding discrimination against gender identity and sexual orientation in programs funded by the Department of Health and Human Services (HHS). Anna North breaks down the new rule, emphasizing its potential effects on affected foster care programs. The rule removes certain language from the previous administration's policies that would now allow certain HHS-funded programs to be exempt from laws protecting discrimination against gender identities and sexual orientations. As it was praised by many for upholding religious freedoms, North claims that it would have an adverse effect on children in the foster care system, especially those of LGBTQ identities. Her primary reasoning is that certain programs would not allow non-Christian or same-sex couples to adopt, thus keeping kids in poor facilities longer and likely sending more to juvenile correctional institutions. Another potential outcome comes through the absence of protection for LGBTQ kids who are introduced into the system, as North claims that foster care programs under the new rule could legally turn away kids of LGBTQ identity from entering under their jurisdiction. She uses statistical data to support her claims of the disproportionality of adoption for same-sex couples, but much of North's persuasive tactics lie in her emotional detailing of a personal story of a student who grew up in a poor foster care facility. Being of Liberian descent, a Muslim, and a homosexual, North uses her as an example of the potential cruelty that foster care programs could act with regarding children of certain identities. As with much of her work, North relies heavily upon assumption and speculation, and so flaws naturally find themselves standing out in such logical processes. Nevertheless, she effectively and thoroughly compiles many relevant facts to validate her perspective, though she is unable to acknowledge or subsequently refute the stances that may invalidate her reason throughout the piece.

Sunday, November 3, 2019

October 2019 W3: “Failed” abortions, a period-tracking spreadsheet, and the last clinic standing: the controversy in Missouri, explained

Anna North

"Hearings will determine if Missouri will be the first state without an abortion clinic."
Vox, October 31, 2019

          Anna North breaks down the most recent national abortion controversy in this convoluted narrative. In essence, the issue at hand involves health officials in Missouri tracking the menstrual data of abortion patients in order to investigate the possibilities of failed abortion procedures. The controversy comes from several recent actions from abortion opponents across the nation that are similar in vein, as abortion activists and doctors alike perceive the new trend as an attack on women's reproductive rights. North outlines their main concerns by tieing the developments in Missouri to those at the federal level, as pro-life politicians seek to impose more control over and restrictions on abortion clinics. As seen in many of her informative essays, there is a notable amount of reason and statistical data that lies in North's arguments. She effectively supports claims of the relative safeness of the procedure that exists in the majority of licensed abortion clinics through hard evidence, and she is fond of using the words of well-known personalities to her advantage. While it is kept to a minimum, there still naturally exists some form of emotional appeal, as North uses a sort of last-ditch attempt to victimize abortion doctors, implying that they are simply innocent, hard-working members of society. Regardless of the moral truth, North's stances remain clearer than typically seen in her pieces, though that might only further show her understanding of her audience and rhetorical situation. 

Sunday, October 27, 2019

October 2019 W2: These laws were meant to protect people from HIV. They’ve only increased stigma and abuse.

Anna North

"Laws in many states make it a crime to have sex without disclosing your HIV status. Advocates say they may actually worsen the spread of the virus."
Vox, October 10, 2019

          In this informative piece, Anna North details the history of HIV laws around the country, beginning with their inception in the '80s and tracking their effects since then that have extended into the present day. North primarily highlights the consequences of said laws and covers negative reactions to them. While she fails to present a clear argument or line of reasoning, she still weaves elements of persuasion into her continuing development of the narrative, a theme common to many of her columns. Nevertheless, she is unafraid to reveal her biases, as she describes claims and pieces of evidence that are exclusive to a single stance. Such aspects take the form of legal history, statistical studies, and personal stories of those affected by HIV laws. In essence, her "argument" is that the current commonplace HIV laws, that were created out of fear and stigmatization of those with the disease, have accomplished little to prevent its spread, and they may have even fueled it. However, North looks through a narrow lens, as she irrationally makes the assumption that her audience holds the same beliefs as she does about how promiscuity impacts society and cultural values. Additionally, she makes several smaller claims that aren't elaborated on and therefore cannot be argued for effectively, including the notion that certain groups experience worse social oppression for their medical condition than others, or that there aren't scientific reasons to explain why certain sexualities have disproportionate levels of HIV compared to others. Admittedly, however, North is able to forcefully emulate emotions of compassion and empathy that contribute significantly to the success of her persuasive strategies. While there are more than a few flaws in her lines of reasoning, this article should remain a point of intrigue and discussion among readers. 

Sunday, October 20, 2019

October 2019 W1: Trump’s “Nervous Nancy” tweet shows his problem with powerful women

Anna North

"Trump tried to shame Nancy Pelosi by tweeting a photo of their meeting. It backfired."
Vox, October 17, 2019

          President Trump recently made a tweet that contained an ad hominem attack on the current Speaker of the House, Nancy Pelosi, including a picture of her standing up and "chastising" the President during a foreign policy meeting. Unexpectedly, however, many took to Twitter to defend Pelosi and spread the image to fire back at the President. Anna North commentates on this new, yet unsurprising, Twitter drama among the most powerful people in the country. North expands on the retaliation against President Trump by arguing for his consistent "misogynistic" behavior, utilizing examples from his past business and political careers, as well as much of his internet rhetoric. She criticizes his frequent and childish personal attacks on political opponents, especially women, claiming that his experience in male-dominated careers leaves him with a strong personality of "toxic masculinity." 
          North's own criticisms, however, ironically closely resemble the very kind that she is demeaning in this article. While name-calling, jokes about physicality, and other such insults used by the men and women in this laughable and increasingly-childish political climate (with much credit owed to the culture of the digital age), are absent from her language, North doesn't hesitate to call out the President's past remarks as cowardly and to classify him as a "bully" of sorts. Her approach is one that further fuels the adolescent style of social interaction and civil discussion among politicians and journalists in the modern era. The merit in her arguments are seemingly valid at face-value, but her strategy of antagonizing the President whilst glorifying Pelosi and other female politicians by similarly-irrelevant reasons model a less-appealing form of journalism. 

Thursday, October 3, 2019

September 2019 Monthly Project: A Reader's Guide to Kevin D. Williamson

Your Complete Guide to Kevin D. Williamson


Kevin D. Williamson speaking at the 2015 National Review Ideas Summit in Washington.
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Kevin Daniel Williamson is an active conservative political commentator and journalist from Texas. He's worked for several newspapers, including The Bulletin, National Review (where he now serves as its roving correspondent), and even The Atlantic briefly. He's contributed to institutions such as The King's College and the Institute for Humane Studies at George Mason University and is the author of seven books, the most recent of which is The Smallest Minority: Independent Thinking in the Age of Mob Politics, published in July of this year. Below are links to reviews and analyses of a few of his most recent opinion articles as seen in National Review.

"Playing God" - An analysis of the "religious progressivist" movement in America.
"Back Off from the ‘Resist’ Nonsense" - A critique of the immoderate voices that cry wolf.
"The Divine Right of the Democratic Party" - An insight into elitest-fueled polarization.
"What’s Behind the Democrats’ Impeachment Gambit?" - An opinion piece on the modern contexts of presidential impeachment.


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As you might have guessed from the pieces detailed above, Williamson is best described as a right-wing fusionist. Through both his implicit and explicit expressions of opinion, it is often difficult for the reader to discern whether he is more of a libertarian or a conservative thinker; in actuality, he is a little of both. He is firmly pro-life, pro-2A, anti-centralized government, and wildly pro-markets. While he is moderately right-leaning on the social spectrum, he is expressly anti-interventionist and pro-free trade, distasteful of government regulations and "nationalist economics," distancing himself from traditional conservatives. At the same time, however, he is not afraid to disagree with his libertarian colleagues, and it can often appear that he is even more critical of his more closely-related ideologues than his more distanced ones.

Williamson is a seasoned veteran of the world of journalism. His notable experience in the media, involvement in modern political literature, and national recognition (mostly by his journalist counterparts) should make it clear to anyone, regardless of political preference, that his sphere of influence is hard to ignore.

Sunday, September 29, 2019

September 2019 W4: What’s Behind the Democrats’ Impeachment Gambit?

Kevin D. Williamson

"What’s Behind the Democrats’ Impeachment Gambit?"
"They think anytime a Republican is elected president, there must have been something 'illegitimate' going on."
National Review, September 26, 2019
https://www.nationalreview.com/2019/09/trump-impeachment-inquiry-democrats-refuse-to-accept-republican-electoral-victory/

          Kevin Williamson introduces his very first take on the Whistleblower scandal with contextually significant pieces of information about his own beliefs and biases about the current President of the United States. Following this, he takes a brief and objective look at the American structure of the Presidency and its varying public reactions. Despite the pure objectivity and neutrality that the concept of impeachment exhibits, however, Williamson turns it into a partisan attack on the Democrats for their actions and words as both a force in national politics and as a model for American democracy in the past 20 years. He does, however, make logical connections between the contexts of current events now and those of years past, as well as a reasonable political analysis that anyone who lives in a democracy should be able to understand. These applications of logos mostly compensate for the general turn-off of a piece of journalism that this would otherwise be, as it is safe to assume that most Americans are exhausted of the back-and-forth, empty ad hominem attacks that modern journalists rely on as a source of financial support and career experience. What Williamson fails to include, however, is a recognition of an opposing argument. He makes an implicit claim at the end of the text that boils down to a statement that Republicans will be likely to act in similar ways when placed in a similar situation as the Democrats are in now, but after just having denounced all of these tactics that the Democrats have employed, it seems Williamson fails to eliminate a possible hypocritical interpretation of his argument. Without having read his other articles and critiques, it is impossible for the reader to know that Williamson is also often critical of the Republican party for following in the Democrats' footsteps, and so the reader is left without sufficient information to draw positive conclusions about the validity of Williamson's argument.

Tuesday, September 24, 2019

September 2019 W3: The Divine Right of the Democratic Party

Kevin D. Williamson

"The Divine Right of the Democratic Party"
"Some progressives do not think we have two legitimate competing political camps. They think the U.S. is suffering from an infection: the Republican party."
National Review, September 11, 2019
https://www.nationalreview.com/2019/09/democrats-dream-of-nation-without-republicans/

          Williamson develops a counterattack in this piece to Michelle Goldberg of the New York Times, who has expressed desires to see the Republican Party disintegrate. Rather than defending the GOP itself, however, Williamson takes a broader approach and seeks to defend the American public. He does not praise the Republican Party, and in fact, he describes it in a rather unflattering manner, and so he looks instead at the successes of the Republican Party and how conservative America has influenced them. He claims that it is not Republicans who have gained success and that the Democrats and progressives despise, it is the collective conservative American public that is behind the flipside of polarized politics. No matter the party that represents them in the future, Williamson states, an attack on America's conservative interests in society will not be a matter of partisan discourse, but rather it will manifest itself as a disdain for political opposition.
          While Williamson fails to discuss the relevance of political civility in this piece--and one could argue that he does little more than only further disgrace it--he nevertheless utilizes strong argumentary tools to formulate a compelling essay. In a (positive) turn of events, he is able to reference real statistical data and relevant current events as primary pieces of support in a surprisingly coherent fashion. However, it is important to note that the tone of the essay is all-too-familiar in the world of new-age journalism. The apparent exigence for this piece is not one that feels particularly mature, nor is this column as a whole seemingly relevant or helpful in discussing politics in any professional manner. Still, for casual readers, it is an interesting (but perhaps redundant, for some) opinion on the hidden implications of partisan-fueled and politically-dishonorable American journalism.

Sunday, September 15, 2019

September 2019 W2: Back Off from the ‘Resist’ Nonsense

Kevin D. Williamson

"Back Off from the ‘Resist’ Nonsense"
"Perhaps we should back off from the Third Reich analogies and begin to take our duties as citizens seriously."
National Review, September 15, 2019

          Once again, Williamson's latest hot take of the week is a fiery jab at elitist left-wing America. Rather than poking fun at one specific individual or occurrence, however, he decides to take a closer look at the "Resist" movement that has taken America by storm since November of 2016 and analyze its effects and consequences henceforth. To give sufficient context, the aforementioned political movement is centered around the "resistance" to the actions and behaviors of our current President of the United States. With that said, I must applaud Williamson for taking a much more mature stance in this piece by abstaining from a childish and defensive reaction--typical of most popular political writing in the modern era--and instead relying on the truths of political theory and societal stipulations to support his argumentary appeals. While he remains liberal in his use of humor and sarcasm, it comes much more sparingly in this piece compared to his last, and they no longer consist of his argument's main support. Instead, his use of historical context and comparative evidence makes for a much more compelling form of journalistic political discourse.

Sunday, September 8, 2019

September 2019 W1: Playing God

Kevin D. Williamson

"Playing God"
"The Democrats take a pause from persecuting Christians to try to coopt them."
National Review, September 8, 2019

          A certain Pete Buttigieg, mayor of South Bend, Indiana, is a rising star in the Democratic party and a potential candidate for its 2020 presidential nomination. Recently, he made a statement concerning environmental regulations and air pollution and used his Episcopalian background to abuse methods of religious appeal. His rhetoric is one of the focal points in Kevin Williamson's latest critique of modern progressive politics. Williamson is fond of dawdling on Buttigieg's simple and informal diction but nevertheless is able to present several examples of the "religious Left" using fake and obscure spiritual ethical codes to promote political beliefs that either fail to have a notable correlation with or outright defies Christian theology. His approach to exposing the falsehoods of left-wing "Christian" politics manifests itself as that of an almost satirical style. His language is straightforward and often sarcastic, and yet it still forces the reader to pay close attention to his tone to grasp his humorous insights. Williamson's arguments, however, rely mostly on said appeal of comedic political banter to strengthen his stance, as there is little actual theological evidence presented in the article. Instead of countering a point with an excerpt from the scripture, he chooses to point out human hypocrisy and throw moral insults at the opposition. And so, unfortunately, the article becomes nothing more than a typical piece of political ranting, complete with weak (and hypocritical) partisan attacks and a complete lack of logical evidence. If one is not already convinced of the dying Christian conservative movement in the face of "new-age conservatives" and hyper-capitalist libertarians, look no further.